Every
year in Japan, 350 billion cigarettes are consumed by 30 million smokers. That means an average smoker smokes around 11667 cigarettes annually, 31
cigarettes daily. Now the question is where do they smoke those 31 cigarettes?
Living in Japan for a few years now, I see that most smokers smoke in public
places. In my opinion, smoking should be banned in public places, especially in
Japan. First of all, smoking in public places will be physically bad for your health
and the people near you. According to the experiment of Dr. Hirotsugu Ueshima, a member of the
Department of Health Science, out of 9638 that smoke, 807 people died because of
strokes. There is also the chance of getting lung cancer. Actually, 90% of men
who get lung cancer are smokers. Side stream smoke is also a big problem. The
other people who get lung cancer are victims of side stream smoke. By inhaling
venomous smoke from cigarettes indirectly, you receive the chance of getting
lung cancer. Secondly, smoking has a bad influence over the environment. The
smell emitted from the burning cigarette will irritate non-smokers young to
old. Smoking also sets a bad example over the children. Smokers make children
think that smoking is “cool”. Third, smoking causes many incidents. The bad
smokers might “accidentally” start a fire by littering there tobacco. Also,
many sculptures displayed in the public places are damaged by burned
cigarettes. For these three reasons, I feel that smoking in public places
should be banned in Japan.
Yusuke
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1)Every year in Japan, 350 billion cigarettes are consumed by 30 million smokers in Japan.
2)...807 people died because strokes.
3)By inhaling the venomous smoke...
4)The bad smokers might “accidentally” start a fire by littering there tobacco.